Query Letters That Sell Your Story
Learn how to leave editors wanting more.
By Al Lautenslager
| April 15, 2002
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Q: I have something
I think the press/media will be interested in, but it's not in
press release form-it's an article. Can I send that to
editors?
A: The way to get
your "story" in front of the editor is to use what is
commonly known as a query letter. The purpose of this letter is to
briefly suggest facts and information to an editor about your
story. The key word is briefly. A query letter is a summary of
information; it is not the whole article. It is sort of a
"tease" that makes the editor want more. The challenge
here, of course, is to take your information and condense it into a
few paragraphs for the query letter.
Many times a company will send out a press release and, at the
conclusion, mention something about the contact person being
available for interviews. Interviews are most often requested as a
result of queries, not press releases. If you're trying to get
a radio or TV interview, then pitching the producer (the equivalent
of editor in the print world) with a query letter will increase
your probability of success.
What goes into a query letter? First, it is still a letter, so
you should present it as such, professionally and concisely. Start
the letter with something that immediately captures the interest of
the editor/producer: a quote, a controversial question or something
that would make a reader stop, think and read what you have to say.
Remember, you are teasing here, so your goal is for them to want to
read further.
Following this, get right to the point of your pitch. It's
always good to put why your article/information is important to the
readership/viewership of the publication. At this point, it's
OK to get a little deeper into your subject matter to round out the
summary, but remember, you are still "teasing." Any
special twists or reasons why your situation is unique can be
stated here. A few more facts (not fiction or opinions) can be
included to round out the summary.
Back to writing basics and communicating what editors want to
hear, you would then communicate exactly what you are proposing.
Editors will check here to make sure you understand their
publication-what column, what department, what section of the
publication. Editors also like to know the length of your proposed
article. It again lets the editor know that you know what
you're doing.
To further lend yourself credibility, you can cite other
publications where your information has been published or where
similar stories were printed. Also, include a brief bit about your
bio/background, not the long, drawn-out bios that you would use
when people introduce you to speak. A standard letter closing,
stating next steps and follow-up with the appropriate level of
courteous, respect and etiquette, concludes the query letter.
Query letters can be very powerful. They can be the start of
some very good media relationships and will once again help editors
and reporters do their jobs. Do that, and your ability to use the
media in your marketing mix will have a higher probability of
success.
Alfred J. Lautenslager is an award-winning marketing and PR
consultant, direct-mail promotion specialist, principle of
marketing consulting firm Marketing Now, and president and owner of
The Ink Well, a commercial printing and mailing company in Wheaton,
Illinois. Visit his Web sites at http://www.market-for-profits.com and http://www.1-800-inkwell.com, or e-mail him at
al@market-for-profits.com.
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