To investigate the effects of these different treatments (English
proficiency level, Manner of study, and Type of feedback) on the
comprehension of the text during the first comprehension exercise, all
students were given 20 minutes to complete a second comprehension
exercise related to the same text. This time, however, all students
received KCR feedback. The score on this second exercise was the
dependent variable. All input data were stored in a database and
analyzed quantitatively. Furthermore, transcripts of the video sessions
were written by the students themselves. The transcripts were then
checked and formatted by the researcher before being analyzed
qualitatively. The results and their implications are discussed below.
QUANTITATIVE RESULTS
Scores on the second comprehension exercise were stored in the
computer log. A three-way ANOVA was then performed. Results are listed
below in Table 1.
A quantitative analysis of the results in this study shows that
there is no support for Hypothesis 1 as the main effect of Type of
feedback was not statistically significant (F (1,217)=0.01, p>.05).
Therefore, Elaborative feedback was found to be equally as effective as
KCR feedback. Students receiving Elaborative feedback (M=10.39, SD=2.00)
in the second comprehension exercise scored slightly higher than, but
not significantly higher than, those receiving KCR feedback (M=10.33,
SD=2.15). The quantitative analysis also shows that there is no support
for Hypothesis 2 as the main effect of Manner of study was not
statistically significant (F(1,217)=1.19, p>.05). Therefore,
individual work (M=10.24, SD=2.21) was found to be equally effective as
pair work (M=10.46, SD=1.95). In contrast, the main effect of the level
of English proficiency level was found to be statistically significant
(F(1,217)=29.19, p<.05). Hypothesis 3 is supported, therefore, as
higher proficiency students (M=11.04, SD=1.93) performed significantly
better than lower proficiency students (M=9.66, SD=1.98) on the second
comprehension exercise.
The interaction between Type of feedback and Manner of study (see
Figure 1 below) was found to be statistically significant
(F(1,217)=4.93, p<.05). Therefore, Hypothesis 4 is supported as it
made a difference to scores on the second comprehension exercise whether
students received Elaborative or KCR feedback, and whether they worked
individually or in pairs during the first comprehension exercise. When
receiving Elaborative feedback, students who worked in pairs (M=10.77,
SD=1.96) scored higher than those who worked individually (M=9.89,
SD=1.95). For those receiving KCR feedback, students who worked in pairs
(M=10.16, SD=1.91) scored lower than those who worked individually
(M=10.54, SD=2.39).
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Hypothesis 5 is not supported as the interaction between Type of
feedback and English proficiency level was not statistically significant
(F(1,217)=2.96, p>.05). In other words, there was no significant
difference between students' scores on the second comprehension
exercise whatever the feedback and whatever the proficiency level. When
receiving Elaborative feedback, higher proficiency students (M=10.83,
SD=2.03) scored higher than lower proficiency students (M=9.94,
SD=1.88). For those receiving KCR feedback, higher proficiency students
(M=11.23, SD=1.83) scored higher than lower proficiency students
(M=9.39, SD=2.06).
Hypothesis 6 is also not supported as the interaction between
English proficiency level and Manner of study was not statistically
significant (F(1,217)=2.05, p>.05). It did not make a significant
difference to scores on the second comprehension exercise whether higher
or lower proficiency students worked alone or in pairs. Higher
proficiency students scored higher when working alone (M=11.12, SD=2.00)
than when working in pairs (M=10.98, SD=1.88). Lower proficiency
students scored lower when working alone (M=9.31, SD=2.06) than when
working in pairs (M=9.94, SD=1.90).
Finally, Hypothesis 7 is not supported as there was no
statistically significant interaction between Type of feedback, Manner
of study and English proficiency level (F(1,217)=0.91, p>.05). For
Elaborative feedback, the highest score in this study was achieved when
higher proficiency students worked in pairs (M=10.94, SD=2.24) and the
lowest score was when lower proficiency students worked alone (M=9.13,
SD=1.85). For KCR feedback, the highest score was achieved when higher
proficiency students worked alone (M=11.45, SD=2.15) and the lowest was
when lower proficiency students worked in pairs (M=9.31, SD=1.93).
To summarise the findings of this quantitative analysis of the data
obtained, significant results were obtained for: (1) the main effect of
English proficiency level and (2) the interaction between Manner of
study and Type of feedback. To help clarify the interpretation of these
results, focus is now placed on examples of the recorded interactions
which are analysed qualitatively.
QUALITATIVE RESULTS
The desirability of quality interaction between students around a
computer was discussed earlier. Therefore, in order to provide a
suitable context for interaction, the volunteer students were asked to
work in pairs and the sessions were recorded and transcribed. To
investigate the perceived degree in which students are: "(a)
behaving cooperatively or competitively and (b) engaging in the critical
reflection or in the mutual acceptance of ideas" (Mercer 2004, p.
146), this study employs the notion of Exploratory talk (Mercer, 1995).
Furthermore, to investigate the quality of the resulting interactions
and the degree to which students engage in the activities, reference is
also made to Wegerif et al.'s (1998) pragmatic ground rules for
promoting Exploratory talk and Wegerif's and Mercer's (1996)
IDRF (Initiation, Discussion, Response, Follow up / feedback) structure.
Examples of interactions illustrating the effects of the different kinds
of feedback are discussed below.
A Typical Scenario--Non-Elaborative Feedback
A common observation in reading classes is that students often copy
answers to comprehension questions directly from answer sheets without
actually considering why their own answers are different and / or
incorrect. The following excerpt highlights this typical dilemma when
two students (Student 1 & Student 2) receive non-Elaborative
feedback, in this case, online. Having completed answering all the
questions,
Student 2 suggests that they should get the computer to check their
answers. Following the feedback,
Student 1 comments that it is only possible to check their answers
once with KCR feedback. There was no attempt to self-correct all five
errors, having received the KCR feedback, and the students considered
the exercise finished.
Interaction with Elaborative Feedback 1
The transcript below comprises part of the interaction between two
students as they read and progress through the first comprehension
exercise. Following the first check of their answers, Elaborative
feedback (lines 403-405) provided by the computer refers students back
to relevant paragraphs in the reading text for three incorrect answers.
Students negotiate with each other and attempt to identify which
questions are wrong. Students manage to identify one of the incorrectly
answered questions (lines 439-440) and decide together to change one of
their incorrect answers (line 443).
Interaction with Elaborative Feedback 2
In the next transcript, students interact as they discuss another
potentially incorrect answer. The point of the question is for students
to find out that it gets darker earlier in Japan than in England in the
summer. As part of the interaction, students negotiate the meaning of
fading light. They locate their second error (lines 552-556) and change
their answer accordingly. However, both agree that they are not sure
what the third incorrect answer is so they agree to check their answers
once more (lines 568-572) and receive the next round of feedback.
Interaction with Elaborative Feedback 3
The next transcript comprises the interaction as students receive
the second round of feedback. Having correctly changed two of their
three incorrect answers, one error still remains. Following Elaborative
feedback (lines 573-575), students are delighted to identify which
question is answered incorrectly (line 578-580). They negotiate the
meaning of the hint and also the information inferred in the text about
what time shops usually close. The point of the question is for students
to determine that shops generally close at 5:30pm in England, much
earlier than in Japan. Students then correct their third error and check
their answers for a third time (lines 580-596). Finally, all questions
are correctly answered (lines 597-599).
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